Your Fall

Thanks for all the comments. I haven't really found anyone on here that has had me on their favorites in a long time.

I keep all of my newer stuff on my allpoetry.com account.

My username is hatsuharu01 if anyone wants to check my new stuff out there.

Awesomeness.
You && a poet named Taymos are my favorites to read on here.
Keep up the magnificent work.

"You are drifting further away
feeding day after day on your pain
But never once do I hear you say
by all of this what you have to gain"

This is so sad and heartbreaking, but you portrayed the emotions perfectly.

"Try as I might though
my voice is all but silent
Standing on the edge you go to show
the promise of death is more than a glint"

Entrancing words, this really is interesting.

"As you take the plunge head first
into that imagined promise land
My pain, anguish, and hatred come in a burst
but for you and relief I fully understand"

Great way to end this piece, really left me astonished. Good write, a very heartfelt deep poem. Keep writing, always and forever....

Good title, i like this poem its very well written xxx