by oddi tea
A beautiful poem |
by 19Rusty
Hey a new one alright, and as always a good rhyming scheme with the writing of love that still relates to my life. And I don't want to brag but now I can use this stuff for my girl! I'll ttul I gtg Byes! |
by Kristina
Awww this is a very sweet poem. i really enjoyed reading it. the words you wrote are wonderful. keep it up 5/5 |
by Marc Ortiz
Simple but beautiful =) Well done :) It was straight to the point, it flowed nicely too. :) The ending is really good. I love it :) I think everyone who is in love can relate to this poem. |
Love has no age limits but kids are ready to say I love you way to soon, you really did a great job with this poem. The Flow is great and the imagery as well, very heartfelt just like the others. Great job 5/5 GG23 |
by Tiller
Hmm, I decided to comment your poem and get another one on mine =) Lol again, you really are a good writer. I mean, I can relate to this again. But who can't? Lol I bet you out of every 100 people who read this, 98 of them can relate to it. =P Good job Sara. |
Awwwww i love this poem its beautiful.. :] |
Alot of your poems speak of love. I assume you've had many prosperous relationship. Much joy and much sorrow. It makes the right person that much more worth while because of all that you've endured to get to that position in your life. great write just as I suspected sara 5/5 |