Nice love it lol ........................... thanks for the comment

It was a good poem :) very unique - keep writing :)

Nice it was a great poem... you got a gift in poetry 5/5 and keep writing on

Gasttlee
What a diffrent piece you have penned. Always a good message from you :)
Take Care Cindy

Good poem it is different from alot of poems i have seen on this site lol but it is still great :):) thx for the comment also

keenan

Interesting to read.....makes one think! Good job....Debbie

Havnt really read anthything like it, great poem to, good job loved it and i cant wait to read more from you

Wow its a nice poem. i really like it. keep up the good work. and thanks for the comment =)

Impressive! 5/5

It was so interesting by all the lines..But I especially liked the ending..It really hit

Just like opportunity,
we build nationality.

Good job,
Laura

Amazging job! i like how it flows so well! =]] great write <3

Very great style and good use of language...well done :)

Great poem!
Very unique
Loved reading it
Take care

Excellent!

Simple and very interesting.

keep it up!

Ooh, this is nice. Especially for someone like me, living in a different country than I'm from. It's great. Very emotional, but easy to get through because of it's simplicity.

Thats soo true .. here u proved that as long as we act like a nation we don't need any papers to prove it! All we need is each other.

That's differently nice ;D
good work