Growing love

by crystaljean88   Jul 13, 2007


A wonderful sensation,
a lovely time.
what we did was amazing,
both of the times.

we made love,
not lust.
did you feel the same thing?
along with my trust?

i almost cried,
after the event.
you said it was good,
and off you went.

this might have been an episode,
and it may never happen again.
but baby think of this,
you should always finish what you begin.

if you have a change of heart,
just let me know.
i will be here,
to help make our love grow

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  • 17 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Beautifully written, comes from the heart... it has real emotion, and passion. I'm sorry if this is real, and he just left, but at least you got a good poem out of it! .... it was great... nice to read, overall really good

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    We made love,
    not lust.
    ^It's the best feeling in the world when its real, isn't it?

    Good poem, I enjoyed it very much.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna

    This is was amazingly written, your poems have such real emotions which i love about your work...i can relate as well, keep it up hun!

    MickeysBabyGurl

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem seemed to flow flrom the heart with a cute rhyme scheme

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Aww this is sad..im sorry if this happened to you....

    the poem though was amazing and i agree with synthetic tears run dry.....the whole couplets thing kinda through the flow off a little for me...but overall good poem.

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