I well written piece with passion and heart felt emotion ,well done.

I really like this poem good job

Very beautifully worded and flowing very well. I can feel sheer love in this piece. Great keep it up. tc

Beautifully worded with passion and heartfelt emotions.
The form was nice, but I wouldn't put them in couplets. By doing so they should of ryhmed.
Still a wonderful piece and a good read..

Elaine.

This was pretty good. My favorite lines were probably the last two stanzas. It had excellent flow, and the wording was nice, though it seemed confusing, I wasn't sure what your subject was.

All in all, it was good!

4/5

I think this a very different type of poem. I liked this very much! 5/5

Awww im so sorry he just upped and left a poem full of hope and sadness both together 5/5

Love it!Again the sincere emotion was great.5/5

I really like this poem but i wish the ending were better....but great poem still! 5/5 for sure!Dont stop writting....Ever!

Aww this is sad..im sorry if this happened to you....

the poem though was amazing and i agree with synthetic tears run dry.....the whole couplets thing kinda through the flow off a little for me...but overall good poem.

This poem seemed to flow flrom the heart with a cute rhyme scheme

This is was amazingly written, your poems have such real emotions which i love about your work...i can relate as well, keep it up hun!

MickeysBabyGurl

We made love,
not lust.
^It's the best feeling in the world when its real, isn't it?

Good poem, I enjoyed it very much.

Beautifully written, comes from the heart... it has real emotion, and passion. I'm sorry if this is real, and he just left, but at least you got a good poem out of it! .... it was great... nice to read, overall really good