Crashing And Burning Seems To Be Your New Game

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jul 13, 2007


Your eyes burn with diamonds much like that of dreamers,
And I don't know, but crashing and burning seems to be your new game,
But I'm wondering if you're supplying the fumes.
Hopefully, if you make the right decisions we all won't go up in flames.

If the buildings burning, I'm pretty sure you could extinguish it with your sarcasm alone;
But that's not what we're really here for, is it my dear -- we've got more to go;
Reach out, don't be frightened, it's only the truth turning into jet planes to fly from your lies,
We'll work on our duties with a bright burst of flames for show.

Now, baby, baby, you've got your diamonds dulling and your sky turning boring colors,
You can't submit to fight every time; you have to lose some of the time,
And you may believe I'm speaking rubbish, but there's more truth then lie to my word;
Crashing and burning seems to be your new game and no one's going to save you this time.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very well expressed feelings. The poem flows well and I liked the way you have structured the whole poem. It is unique in its own style. The grief and the mournful feelings are really nicely explained. Well deserved 5/5

    With love
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. the netaphor is brilliant. i love your work!!!! another 5/5.

    crazygonuts.

    your a wonderful poet.

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    CrazyGoNuts. Got it out firstttt, yo.

    Mkay. Well, I love it. I'm not sure why, though babe.
    Like, it's a good poem and it has an amazing flow. And, the meaning is great, and the word choice is quite amazing, and I love it.
    It's just.. there's something saying " it's only okay"
    Does that make sense?

    But, like it's AMAZING.
    I love it, a lot.
    Especially the first and last stanza. :]
    The first line, babe.. WOW.
    It's amazing.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by gorgeous girl

    This was an excelleny piece of writing. I loved it. I loved every bit of it. Very well done.. Great job and keep up the good work..

  • 17 years ago

    by gorgeous girl

    This was an excelleny piece of writing. I loved it. I loved every bit of it. Very well done.. Great job and keep up the good work..

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