Sheena, not only to I get to be first comment! ((YaY!)) But I get to be first comment on a great poem! I saw that you had been in writer's block, but reading this, I could never tell. You are an amazing writer with LOADS of talent that's very clear to see. This poem had it all, perfect rhyme, flow, language and use of words. It captured my interest and gave me great images. It was a great piece of work, dear!
Much Love<3
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This was an excelleny piece of writing. I loved it. I loved every bit of it. Very well done.. Great job and keep up the good work..

This was an excelleny piece of writing. I loved it. I loved every bit of it. Very well done.. Great job and keep up the good work..

This was an excelleny piece of writing. I loved it. I loved every bit of it. Very well done.. Great job and keep up the good work..

CrazyGoNuts. Got it out firstttt, yo.

Mkay. Well, I love it. I'm not sure why, though babe.
Like, it's a good poem and it has an amazing flow. And, the meaning is great, and the word choice is quite amazing, and I love it.
It's just.. there's something saying " it's only okay"
Does that make sense?

But, like it's AMAZING.
I love it, a lot.
Especially the first and last stanza. :]
The first line, babe.. WOW.
It's amazing.

5/5

Wow. the netaphor is brilliant. i love your work!!!! another 5/5.

crazygonuts.

your a wonderful poet.

Very well expressed feelings. The poem flows well and I liked the way you have structured the whole poem. It is unique in its own style. The grief and the mournful feelings are really nicely explained. Well deserved 5/5

With love
Fsams