Beautiful penned, even though simply but well expressive emotions.... "who can make the best out of the way things turn out. It's not the situation, It's your reaction to the situation."

Best wishes from west.

It was amazing, straight to the point, I can feel your emotions in this short but beautiful poem, well done

another 5/5!

Fantastic. I'm glad to see you posting, once again, Taylor. :] For a short and simple form, you brought volumes of meanings. I'd say, be certain to love the person you dearly cherished with exceeding passion and care. Be not afraid.

Best wishes,
Marian

I havn't seen you posting in awhile and it's really good to have you back it seems like it's for the best. This Tanka was beautiful. with such a short poem you expressed so much deeply. An effective poem with so much emotions.

Good work~mel

That was cute.. Short but sweet..

It does not matter how long the poem is unless you express your feelings and you feel that it is done. Great job. 5/5

Short and sweet. You have added so much of meaning to this piece with those very precise words. tc

I love this...you managed to put in so much depth and emotion despite the form being relatively short, and that's not always easy to do.

Beautiful ending, I found it to be filled with so much emotion.

On the whole, beautifully written.