Very unique and creative, greatly written with such powerful imagery. My favorite lines are: |
Very interesting and intriguing style, I love the caesura you used -- very fitting. This has a gentle musicality to it, that was superb! Only one spot tripped up for me: |
by Beautifully Nothing
Wow! amazing poem! i'm so sorry i didn't get to these sooner, i have been really busy with work, school and family issues. i'm glad i finally got some time because you are an amazing writer! the rhymes are right on and this poem really does make a picture in your head. 5/5 |
Very good 5/5 |
by unblue skye
Amazing, :D |