I know baby.
But I still love you.

And i may tell you that this was the best dear. i really love that i can see you as a very successful writer now, it is a great acomplishment dear.

This isn't odd at all. i really like it. i feel the same way about someone i feel im about to lose to someone else. it got straight to the point and you made yourself clear. great job and beautifully written.

This is also a good poem and the simplicity adds more value to this piece. Keep writing. tc