Very interesting poem...a little discusting but good lol...good job

ashleigh

*little scream*
So one of my favorites by you, Keenan! :D

I adore the part, as follows, where you stated:
"The feel of rotting flesh,
the atrocious smell
makes my blood run
as if these corpses [are] all I need"
^It simply gave me an odd, tingling feeling :]; furthermore, the title of this piece gave me... a laugh! Haha. So you have a sexual desire for dead bodies, huh? Lol, nice. Anyway. I think you did a rather astonishing job with this piece. A delight to read, nonetheless.

Take care,
Debbie

I loved how you put yourself into the position of being in someone elses shoes. You were being yourself yet added the twist to this piece. I must say I adore this piece. Definitly amazing. Your work seems to improve. Great read. Keep it up~mel

Hey Keenan I loved this one it is really good I re read it like six times very cool mon amie.

Beck