Comments : You Can't Stop The Beat

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    Excellent piece. The imagery is great. The sadness can be felt in every word you have penned.

    So tonight, with tears of anger shed
    from your slight regard
    I packed my things and stowed them in the car
    For all the senseless words you said
    I finally realized
    You couldn't stop the beating of my heart.

    I love this last stanza.
    Love Cindy