Heartbroken

by Lonely Little Dreamer   Jul 13, 2007


Secret crushes and hidden love.
Never to be announced.
Feelings held deep inside.
Slowly breaking the heart.

Always your shoulder.
Letting tears fall.
Listening ever so intently.
To the love you want so badly.

Though Im here.
It seems invisible to your eyes.
My heart aches.
Wanting to be by your side.

Impossibilities stemming from reality.
We are never meant to be.
The final arrow has been shot.
Heart shattering completely.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Oh my gosh .. this poem does not deserve to be downvoted...grr that makes me mad!

    you did a wonderful job with this... it was full of sadness and emotion...you wrote it beautifully...

    and in my opinion this does not deserve a 3.. it deserves a 5..

    nice work.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kerry

    Well this is my comment but dont take it to harshly...I didnt really like it it did flow, hardly ryhmed. Also most too short to get a point across. But you did put emotion into it. i would give it a 3/5.

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