Yes, I agree. You're born to be a writer.. C=

Its very good....i think it is anways! =-)
ttyl

BabyGurl

This is actually very good especially considering how young you were when you wrote it.

Nice job!

--Sher

Ok just a comment...i think line 4 needs to be broken up into more lines...it doesnt make sense as a run on..if you do that it will be much better. I didnt down vote cause I broke it up in my head and it would sound great that way..lol..if you need any advice about breaking it up just PM me. Keep it up.

Such the little genius at such a young age. I was writing at that age, too. I don't remember all of why either.