Oh my, that was so sad! I can just see a very sorrowful picture! You wrote it so well, you never repeated any thoughts except for the main idea...most people cant do that, I cant even do that! It flowed so well, great job! I want to read the spanish version now, this version was amazing so that one must be too!

~Mo~

I don't have words to describe what I felt when I read this poem.It's amazing.Congratulations!!Take care of you and keep up the good work!Best regards,Michelle XxX 5/5