Comments : He Wasn't What I Thought

  • 17 years ago

    by Sad But True

    I love this poem, well written and love the truth in it. Sad to think how much pain falling in love causes us. 5/5 for a brilliant piece. I hope we both choose better in the future.

    My last bad choice is best described in a poem call "The Devil in a black dress"

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Well no prizes for guessing who this is about...he isn't worth feeling sad over, but no matter how much someone tells you that it doesn't help, i know that lol.
    I really liked the poem though, flowed well, the 2nd to last stanza, the last 2 lines of it i didn't like the flow in them, but you know what i'm like i'm fussy haha.
    First poem i have read in months =]

  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Each lines really conveyed one intense emotions which is sadness.The flow was great too.Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow i cant relate to this definitely. it's such a sad poem, but an amazingly written one. the words flowed so nicley together. i loved it very much. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Phil

    What a beautiful piece of writing , very sad what happened, I loved the way you worded it, keep up the great work
    your friend Phil