Wow that was a very original poem with great desciption and transition 5/5 for sure maybe u can read one of mine.

Orignal subject there i havent heard of anything like it, you described it well :)

Wow this too was very unique. I loved how you wrote it from the park's perepective. It sounded in the beginning like a park when children used to play but then they stopped because of societys fear of kidnapping and that kind of thing. But then the further I got into the poem I started to think differently. Now I think that its about a park who misses the young couple that used to play there all the time. Nice job. keep the reader guessing till the end. fantastic.