What a heart touching piece ,beautifully written.I have been reading through some of your other poems and so far they all very good ,you have a great talent.

OOo i like this poem...definetly understand it and can connect and otherwise its written so well and flows so smoothly...5/5

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Hey paul!! aww that was sooooooo soooooo sad..the poem was so great and heartfelt..i really liked the way you put the poem together and the flow u had..good job! take care...

~Mara~