Shh

by Lulu goth   Jul 13, 2007


Shh shut your eyes
And go to sleep
Come on dare to dream again
It's only dawn
You're at the start
It will never break your heart

How fast it flies by
In no time you'll be gone
You'll be dead, you'll be past

I cannot hope any longer
Things will never be much smoother
Everything is so out of control
You will keep on losing hold

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lulu goth

    Thank you all for your comments!! XxXx

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    Hmmm...pwetty neat....Good Job..and i think it has that whisepring wind kinda' feel wen u read it..so thats damn good..

    keep it up

    lookin forward fr more work..

    ~Wake~

  • 17 years ago

    by No one

    Ooooo me likey!
    You never told me you wrote, damnnnn yashi, you is goooood!

    Loving the imagery!

    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ixora

    How sad but i can connect to it...good job

    *^*crow*^*

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats good xxx

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