This piece it general yet specific, which I really like. You tell of some of your own flaws but at the same time make it applicable to everyone since I don't think all of us are open books.

I rated it the way I did though was because your flaws that you wrote about aren't pharsed in a more mysterious way to add wonder. In my opinion it would have been very neat if you worded your flaws in a myseterious way, and then say your reasons for the flaws in an obvious way as you had done in this piece. That contrast real life; I mean in real life people see your flaws but not the reasons for them and in the poem people would see the reasons but not the flaws themselves.

I liked this poem!!

Ummm...i hope your nicer than you may know, anyways just accept that its part of life, but your to be desired life will soon show what a great person you are, your poem is so sweet! keep it up

Ummm...i hope your nicer than you may know, anyways just accept that its part of life, but your to be desired life will soon show what a great person you are, your poem is so sweet! keep it up