Comments : Not so perfect

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Nobodys perfect hu but your poem isnt far off xxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ixora

    OOo i like this poem and ur name as well..though hard to pick here i really liked these versus:

    "I count my imperfections
    And I hold my head real low
    I don't look to the future
    It's just another tomorrow

    My hopes and dreams are damaged
    At times I tend to cry
    I get a little controlling
    And I suck at saying goodbye"

    ..i also like the ending verse very strong and all in all beautifully written

    *^*crow*^*

  • 10 years ago

    by mazzy star

    When I fall inlove
    I tend to fall real hard
    The proof is on my arm
    With each and every scar.

    Very well written.

  • 10 years ago

    by LoneWolf

    I find that this poem fills my head with images of a broken-hearted person who feels as if they had made many mistakes.

    It is a great poem. Straight to the feels.