*say goodbye before i forget their names* wow -thats really moving good job xxx

I disagree...i think it is a fantastic poem with a fantastic inspiration that made it come to be...alzheimers may well be the worst type of disease a human gets because it hurts everyone on a deep and personal level as an emotional disease...i thought u portrayed it very well and it was a beautiful yet sad poem all in all

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Wow sammy thats awesome...i know who youre talking about to...and what is this about it being a bad poem?!? its great

I, too disagree.
This is a fantastic poem that is filled with a huge inspiration. :) Lovely job on this one. The emotions were strong & the flow was good.

"All I want is my memory to last,
Say my goodbyes before I forget their names,"

^ Wonderful job. 5.5
- Stephanie Lynn .+.

I had a head injury three months past and I have trouble with current things but not the past. I can feel their frustration and it must be one of the cruelest diseases, I think you are one of the best poets I have read, I also added Bob Shanks to my favourites today for the themes and structure. But your poemsa re truely wonderful I will read many when Im not sleeping which seems to be the norm since I was punched.

I think that you have captures a really great piece. I really enjoyed it

5/5

There's a lot of emotion captured in this piece. It's quite a wonderful read. 5/5

marcella

There is so much emotion in this! my grandmother actually died from this too...its hard to even think about....but this is soooo beautfiul. keep it up and thanks for your comments.

BabyGurl

So expressive. You made me realise the depths of the disease and what it's really like. A few people in my family have this and it is such a tragedy to see it happen thankyou for expressing this to us and making me aware. I loved how the lines got longer as you went along it was really effective. The flow was great and didn't falter at all. A great read. ~Mel

A very emotional piece - it actually reminds me of my grandmother. It's sad and is able to convey the emotions behind a horrible disease.

I loved it very much

A friend of mine had a grandmother who had the same thing..so its almost chilling to see just how accurate your poem is to what actually happens..its a sad condition and you captured that in this poem, great work

andrew

This is amazing! And your style is sort of like mine!
5/5

Awful....being not able to remember ones you love......

Very well-written! good job !