by Crystal Gaze Jul 13, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
In the dark she sleeps, |
by Miranda
Amazing.I love how short it is because it makes you think and imagine different things. |
by Kayla
This poem is a little different from the rest I have read so far. To me, this one sounds a bit creepy.. nothing wrong with that though, I like how this one is an odd ball in the group. |
by Nix
Very interesting poem. You created powerful atmosphere with just a few words. It is really deep... 5/5 |
I voted this a 3 cause i didnt feel the way it was that short. you could of made this better by making it longer |
by Anaisthitos
This poem was beautiful. I know how hard it is to protray the full emotion and elegance in haiku's but you did an excellent job in doing so! |