by X2892
It was short but good, i give it a 5/5 |
by Marc Ortiz
It was a great Senryu :) I like your choice of words, keep up the good work. |
Great poem!! Short, but with a lot of meaning in just a few very well chosen words! You are a great writer... and I look forward to reading more of your work :-) 5/5! |
by Anaisthitos
This poem was beautiful. I know how hard it is to protray the full emotion and elegance in haiku's but you did an excellent job in doing so! |
I voted this a 3 cause i didnt feel the way it was that short. you could of made this better by making it longer |
by Nix
Very interesting poem. You created powerful atmosphere with just a few words. It is really deep... 5/5 |
by Kayla
This poem is a little different from the rest I have read so far. To me, this one sounds a bit creepy.. nothing wrong with that though, I like how this one is an odd ball in the group. |
by Miranda
Amazing.I love how short it is because it makes you think and imagine different things. |