by Marius Laun Jul 14, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Moon over mountains |
by Nix
Interesting haiku. Imagery is good and I can see that moon right in front of me. Very simple and powerful piece. 5/5 |
by nikki
It was very short but you portrayed the message across beautifully, nice work 5/5 |
Very short, straight to the point but.. I like it lol. gave me the image of a full moon and mountains with a woods close by with little wolfs there lol. |
I think you should add on to this before I decide to vote on it. You don't have to add if you don't want to but I think you should make some more imagery to it. Oooo do a vampire poem with it. Once I read the word eerie again I figured it'd be a great monster poem. Or you can do a ghost/zombie (i hate those things)/werewolf. |
by Mr M
A nice Haiku and thanx for telling us about the name. You really wonder where some of these people get them...lol |