Sounds kind creepy sushi

I love when people write short and sweet poems. I love how the few words can catch my attention so easily. You painted a beautiful picture with these three lines. A great expression of feelings. Great job! keep it up!

~Mo~

Whoa! This is amazing work! Each word really pulls you in! 5/5

A nice Haiku and thanx for telling us about the name. You really wonder where some of these people get them...lol

I think you should add on to this before I decide to vote on it. You don't have to add if you don't want to but I think you should make some more imagery to it. Oooo do a vampire poem with it. Once I read the word eerie again I figured it'd be a great monster poem. Or you can do a ghost/zombie (i hate those things)/werewolf.

Very short, straight to the point but.. I like it lol. gave me the image of a full moon and mountains with a woods close by with little wolfs there lol.

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It was very short but you portrayed the message across beautifully, nice work 5/5

Interesting haiku. Imagery is good and I can see that moon right in front of me. Very simple and powerful piece. 5/5