Paradise

by LuvLyLynn   Jul 14, 2007


Filled with wonders on this moonlit night,
But being here with you it feels so right...

Looking at the stars with our feet in the sand,
You hold me close to you, hand in hand...

We stand there while watching the ocean glisten,
As my head is against your chest, it's your
heart that I listen...

Feeling the cool breeze hit against my face,
But I feel safe in your warm embrace...

These feelings I have for you I could never forget,
For every moment I spent with you is a moment
I would never regret...

You still have a piece of my heart,
No matter where you are, even though we're
miles apart...

So as for now, what we have we'll let it suffice,
Til we see each other again,'til I'm back in your
arms where it's paradise...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    GOOD GOOD GOOD
    WWWWOOOOWWWW
    love it
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awwww this is such a heartfelt poem...it touched me because i've felt like this before... i thought this was an amazing poem...5/5

    ~michelle~

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh wow that was simply amazing.. Are you in a long distance relationship? If you don't mind telling me please PM me xD

    Anyway, you have a great vocab, I like your choice of words, flow was smooth - keep it up

    Feeling the cool breeze hit against my face,
    But I feel safe in your warm embrace...
    ^^ I really adore those two lines ^_^

    Btw the ending was superb!

    A perfect 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow sooo nice poem.You're really good at it.Keep on writin cause i really wanna keep on readin such poems.U're awesome.

    ~Christina~

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    It was amazing, i loved it. you got talent, maybe you should put it into stanza's, it might be a bit easier to keep up where the reader is. but over all, it was a perfect poem. 5/5

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