I know how it feel dear, when someone s aprat.
a very greatly writeen great poem, ur so talented dear.

It was amazing, i loved it. you got talent, maybe you should put it into stanza's, it might be a bit easier to keep up where the reader is. but over all, it was a perfect poem. 5/5

Wow sooo nice poem.You're really good at it.Keep on writin cause i really wanna keep on readin such poems.U're awesome.

~Christina~

Oh wow that was simply amazing.. Are you in a long distance relationship? If you don't mind telling me please PM me xD

Anyway, you have a great vocab, I like your choice of words, flow was smooth - keep it up

Feeling the cool breeze hit against my face,
But I feel safe in your warm embrace...
^^ I really adore those two lines ^_^

Btw the ending was superb!

A perfect 5/5!

Awwww this is such a heartfelt poem...it touched me because i've felt like this before... i thought this was an amazing poem...5/5

~michelle~

GOOD GOOD GOOD
WWWWOOOOWWWW
love it
5/5