I like the ending sentence it was a very strong conclusion to the poem and the poem itself was well written. im glad you dont think that way because its kind of the thoughts of someone whose given up, and ofcourse thats never good..i hope you're able to inspire your friend to see in a positive way maybe you should show them this poem so they can see you understand...

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Hey this poem was good but strongly worded keep it up
~danielle~

I really like this
(no i'm not like that either) but it's still a really good poem
keep up the good work

I like this poem.
I think this poem inspired people who are going through this ;]

ME yR beuuterflY oN youR poemS, i reallY appreciatE yR writingS verY mucH, theY giveS pleasurE.

luzaN