Wow i had never cried over a poem but this brought tears to my eyes! AMAZING WRITING!!

This is amazing!
its not that often that i find a real masterpiece on this sight, but it appears that you have provided one, that i hope you are proud of =)
the thing that makes it as amazing as i say is that it is not only 4 lines that are good, it is a whole poem that is good, which is why if there was a rating of more than 5 i would give you more =-P
great write, i hope there is more to come!