I like this poem, it reminds me of a rocky relationship I had.....

I love this poem keep up the good work

Well. i simply love this poem. reminds me a bit of my poem 'one bottle' lol :) it was a nice write. i liked how you used your words in rhymes, it was a beautiful flow as well. i usually don't like rhyming poems but you just stole my heart :) keep up the good work my friend :)

-Terra

Wow...this is nice...i really dont come across good poetry often...good poetry to me has to have a nice flow to it and stay on point...wonderful, absolutely wonderful

This is great 5/5

This is good