Thats beaurtiful ,hope you get that one change.I do so love reading your writes.Hope you are well ,take care.

Loved it, thought it was awesome. you do write such beautiful poetry. nice work

Aw that was realli beautiful. i realli liked her i hope u get the girl u want =) very well written xx

Bert, awesome poems my friend, you're to good for writing love poems, till they do like that, but i know you don't mind.... because you've told me before....anyway, keep writing! take care, your friend from south.

Bert
It s so hard when you can not be with the one you love. There is love in this piece. Yet also sadness.

You're in a relationship, of this there is no doubt
All I ask is a chance, if it doesn't work out
It's obvious that it's you, I love and adore
Please think of me, I implore.

Thes lines touch the heart. Follow your dreams :)
Take Care Cindy

Beautiful, romantic and sad.....very sweet....

I just love it. I have never seen on like it before keep up all the wonderful work.