Goodbye is the last word,
To all dreams that you tore
To all the promises you could swore...
I promise not to let my tears to go stray,
Neither will they be wasted away ,
On a painful realisation
Which is so hard to say...
These are so heartfelt lines for me. I could almost feel your pain when I read it. The Total rhyming stanza was also good except the last line "You had enough trying to make my life a living hell". Little work on this line would improve the rhythm and flow of the stanza string. But but but...your poem is 100% poetic and it is outstanding. :)