Comments : Pain.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mihaela

    Your poem is great.I really like the way you express your feelings.So,keep on the good work and take good care of you *hugs*hugs*hugs*

  • 17 years ago

    by Helen

    Thank you Rebecca, its how i feel to in a way, been always the quiet girl who was easy to pick on because i did nothing, but i broke out =] thats were the beguins of that came from really =]

  • 17 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    This is really good
    it wasnt confusing at all
    it made more sense than a lot of poems that ive read
    but it really like got my attention
    i loved the format you put it in
    not like an average poem
    but somehting with meaning
    you werent trying to push yourself to rhyme
    and you werent trying to let every sentence have the same structure as the next
    but you just let out what you were thinking
    and thats how poems should be
    it was amazing really
    keep it up.
    youre talented.
    <3jess

  • 17 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Great poem.
    nicely written. 5/5.