Awww hats really good, hope they stay with you xxxxxxxx

Wow. i loved it, everything was perfect about it. i don't know someone would down vote you, the flow was great, the structure i loved and it was amazing how you brought such a strong picture to my mind. 5/5

Beautiflul and flowing well. The feelings are depicted clearly. Good word choice n style. It has poetic and lexical quality. 5/5 all the way. tc

^^ i agree...this poem was amazing...this is how i've felt before...its like you want so bad to hate him but your heart is telling you that you love him...yup been there..lol..good job!

After reading the first stanza I was hooked, the imagery was placed in my head like a photograph. Once again very heartfelt and strongly written, 5/5 GG23

Now this was really really good i liked the flow the choice of words and the theme its a sad one but well written good stuff!!!

First two stanzas are greatest. Atmosphere of this piece is excellent, topic is also very interesting. It deserves 5/5

The simplicity of words fitted every description. In fact, it turned out to be great even though the wasn't that perfect. But I believe that this is a really great poem and many would be able to relate.