Thats a good poem well done and keep it up xxxx

Thats a good poem well done and keep it up xxxx

Great job
5/5

This poem read straight from the heart. The emotions were laced with paina and sadness and they rang true. The poem was well written and an enjoyable read.
But may I suggest you go back and play with the wording. I could be wrong but I think it would just help the flow.
Still a good read.
Very much enojoyable.
Elaine

A beautiful free verse poem. Iloved your wordings and it is very well structured. I can really feel your ideas and intentions from this piece. 5/5 all the way

Yours true reader
Fsams

Unfortunetly this is incredibly true, men have a habit of making women feel like crap... i really hope you strangled the bloke ^_^ very nice poem as well hun 5/5 xxxx

I can totally relate to this.. very nice work.. the poem seemed kinda forced thought.. but the wording was nice. i rate this a 5

I thought this was an ok poem
it just seemed that you
through some lines together

and yes they have some meaning behind
them but i think it could be stronger, 4/5

Great poem that flows great and has great wording ^_^ It bugs the heck out of me how many guys do that GGRRR Anyway I'm sorry you ever had to go through that kind of pain =( I know you don't deserve it =( Hope your ok ^_^ 5/5
Rhea

I'm pretty sure all girls HATE it when guys do that, they need to think more. Anyways this was a really good poem, but I think it could've flowed better. The structure was well thought out. Overall it was pretty good. Keep it up!