Rain drop

by JaMeS   Jul 14, 2007


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love has landed
landed like a rain drop
and like a rain drop
love has no true shape or form
like a rain drop
its direction and destination cannot be controlled
like a rain drop
love has no real definitive size
like a rain drop
love refreshes us
it can wipe away tears
it can grow and give hope
love is like a rain drop
everyone on the planet feels it
and like a rain drop
life would simply collapse without it

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  • 16 years ago

    by CrazyCowLady

    Thats is beautiful... it really gives a menaing to love and wat it is

  • 17 years ago

    by Jade

    This is a really awesome poem..Makes me want to play in the rain. With another person though.lol. but you are really talented..I looked at your profile..I hope the writers block goes away...I really want to read some more of yours.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammy

    WOW! A truly beautiful write.

  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    THIS IS SO TRUE, all the description were true and how u used raindrops in comparing it to love were great!! This was nice and the imagination were nice also but i suggest expand the description and imagination more coz i know you can put some more interesting and captivating words in it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney

    WOW! I think this is my favorites of yours. Or at least one of them. I loved how you took just an ordinary thing and used it in your work to make it so extraordinary. Your so right though, love is in many ways... just like a rain drop! Amazing write!
    5/5
    *Brittney

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