Comments : The Only One

  • 17 years ago

    by Hope

    Dopn't know what to say about this one.. I just love all of ur writing

  • 17 years ago

    by Run out of words

    "You're the only one
    Who knows who I am.
    You know my secret needs
    And you held onto my hand"

    I loved that stanza. Especially the heldo nto my hand part. It's so sweet, and I relate to this poem so much. You have a gift, which allows you to write beautiful love poems...the flow in this one was ok...I think at some parts...like this stanza for example..it was kinda off?..but I lvoed your word usage and the rhymes and the thought behind the poem...and so it was wonderful!