I really love your writing and I am glad that we can keep in touch and understand me as much as I understand you. I think this one will eventually become sort of big, as in a lot of comments. But I had to reall yfocus on it to understand. Keep it up!

Alright, that was pretty good. it was deep. great job 5/5

That man whose heart
Is not been defiled
Who will not just stand with the truth
But is ready to go down with it

I cant put it into words, but I just really loved and understood the message of what you are trying to say in this poem. Maybe, one day someone will read this poem, and they will be that man that this poem is talking about. One day.

Hmm, intresting... i rly liked it especially the end. good job keep it up!

.:Katelyn:.

I really liked this poem
especially the ending, great jobx

I didn't really follow this one. Which means it was probably really deep.

Wow, I really loved this poem, WONDERFUL JOB, i can't describe how much I admire it, but I adore the way you write.