Comments : Lost At Sea

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really good and i like the title choice xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    I reackon you could have put another paragraph on the end!! great writing though!! 5/5 :):)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    I find it very interesting. Good thoughtful write. Liked it!

  • 16 years ago

    by maida

    Wow...that poem was so cute! keep on writing..