by crystaljean88 Jul 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Im in love, |
by Christina
Gosh lol another wonderful write!!! keep up the great writting!! |
by TrUtH hUrTs
Well.. .the emotions are genuine.. i wud just like them to show a little more.. ur poem is a lil lacking in expression and description.. but keep workin. ur on the right track :) |
by skynerraw
Beautiful. you expressed your feelings, amazinly throughout the poem, but it was simple and easy to read. Relitivly short, but really good!! 5/5 |
Very beautiful, I really liked this poem a lot. What sometimes disappoints me are the grammatical errors and oversights because I feel they sometimes detract from what you're trying to convey, because you have such a way with expressing your feeling. Still a good piece! |
by Jenna
I really like this...it was beautifully written your emotions just pour out of it...the message was great. keep it up! |