Winter's rose

by Amy   Jul 15, 2007


A wilted rose turning brown,
Pokes out from the sodden ground.
Bruising in the heavy rain,
Making one bush bare again.
Sparrows did inhabit it,
But away from it they now flit.
As it stands now brown and bare,
It looks as if no-one cares.
Shivering as if it's cold,
A winter's rose getting old.
But living another year,
In the garden just out there.
A wilted rose turning brown,
Now lies sadly on the ground.

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  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    WoW! Great imagery! The title is very intriguing and the poem doesnt disappoint! I love how you described it in the end "A wilted rose turning brow, now lies sadly on the ground." Great job!!

    ~Morgan~

  • 17 years ago

    by stefanie

    Amazing. the flow was perfect and it was nicely written.

  • 17 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Amazing, an Exellent poem if I ever saw one!

  • 17 years ago

    by Krysten

    Okay im not really a bigf fan of nature poems but i did enjoy this one. it was a short and simple read with amazing diction and imagery. so keep it up 5/5

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