Comments : I'll Admit

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    I loved the poem, it's so easy for us to point out our faults, and this poem was definitely one we could all relate to. great job, i liked it all, the wording, the flow. all of it. great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Amy

    Great job. It had a good rythm. I'm sure we're all a bit like that, I know I have my faults anyway. I'm probably the most stubborn person I know lol. Anyway, great poem, I really enjoyed it.

  • 17 years ago

    by unknown

    Nice, very nice poem.. :)
    It has strong emotion in every stanza. The flow was nice. And the way your wrote, was good as well..
    Being the ending of the poem, the three last lines were great. Beautifully done.. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. i really liked this poem. its true we all have our imperfections, but to over come them makes us only better. your poem was almost motivating people to change for themdselvs to be happy. i great writ with a really good flow..full of emotion in every stana. deffinatly a 5/5
    xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    The poem itself was nicely written. there were a few areas where it seemed you don't need the pronouns.

  • 17 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    You just described me... I cried.... Guess I'm not the only one with imperfections... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Wow,
    this poem stays true to the heart. i never read something like this befor. it shows a lot of emotion. great work. i rate this a 5

  • 16 years ago

    by Toni Ann

    Awesome Poem!!