by Mousie
I loved the poem, it's so easy for us to point out our faults, and this poem was definitely one we could all relate to. great job, i liked it all, the wording, the flow. all of it. great job |
by Amy
Great job. It had a good rythm. I'm sure we're all a bit like that, I know I have my faults anyway. I'm probably the most stubborn person I know lol. Anyway, great poem, I really enjoyed it. |
by unknown
Nice, very nice poem.. :) |
Wow.. i really liked this poem. its true we all have our imperfections, but to over come them makes us only better. your poem was almost motivating people to change for themdselvs to be happy. i great writ with a really good flow..full of emotion in every stana. deffinatly a 5/5 |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
The poem itself was nicely written. there were a few areas where it seemed you don't need the pronouns. |
You just described me... I cried.... Guess I'm not the only one with imperfections... 5/5 |
Wow, |
by Toni Ann
Awesome Poem!! |