Comments : TV CHILDREN

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    LOl very hilarious piece. I enjoyed reading it. correct some few mistakes and it willbe flawless....like their/there in 2nd last line, from/fom and than/then. Tc

    5/5 keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by IllNeverBGoodEnouf

    Woo! i love it its ahamzing good job great work keep it up!!!! 5/5