by Mess Of A Dreamer Jul 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I never thought |
by Kayla
This was a beautiful poem dear, it really was. I can relate to it in so many ways, I just thought of me and my boyfriend who I love dearly the entire time I was reading this. You do have a way with words and you really showed it in this poem. One thing though.. not to be offensive, but you should really clean it up some, make the poem look neater. It makes your poems look a lot better if you capitalize the first word of each line and also I saw that you misspelled "This".. so, just do that sweetie and it'll be perfect! You still deserve a 5/5 though, I hope to read more from you soon! <3 <3 |