Comments : Selfishly Burning an Innocent Girl

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I wont forget you, im sorry you feel this way pm me anytime and keep writing xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Reaper

    Sad poem:[:[:[:[

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Excellent rhymes with great flow and through insight. Great write and well penned.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney

    Great write! The words flowed nicely together.
    5/5
    *Brittney

  • 17 years ago

    by Willow

    Wow!! i really like this one. it touched me. i don't really know what to say. you have real talent to pen something that great. 5/5.
    love willow oxox

    p.s. thanks for the comment too....

  • 17 years ago

    by SunDown Sky

    I like the fact that it rhymes pretty good although the lines are long... its easy to read and it flows well.
    good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by cory

    Wow u really did a phenomenal job on this 1. it had a catostrphic feel to it. i loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by cory

    Catastrophic*

  • 17 years ago

    by the song writer

    It's very well written
    and I enjoyed reading it.
    you depicted your emotion very well.

    (thanks for the comment)

  • 17 years ago

    by Blake

    Very nice i loved it