by my name is Llama Jul 15, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
My head touches the pillow, my eyes begin the close |
by Oscar
Oooh i had to reread this poem because i loved it so much. it was really well written, rhymed, and delivered. this is definately one of my favorites from yours so far. |
by JaMeS
In my opinion that was absolutely fantastic when i read it without the 3rd stanza but the 3rd needs to be changed i think but apart from that the rhyimg, the style and the wording was all really good top marks :) |
by Anaisthitos
Wow. This poem is simple yet really great. It was origional, and detailed, and very cute. =) the flow was excellent and the word choice was amazing. |
by X2892
Well written poem, i like it a lot, also it gets a 5/5 :-) |
by Marc Ortiz
I like the imagery in the poem, I also like the rhyming of the poem, well done. I like your dream xD Could you please write a second part of this poem xD |