Revolution of emotions

by my name is Llama   Jul 15, 2007


Lying down in a field of lush green
Watching the sunset, colors of tangerine

The cool air begins to penetrate my soul
My emotions start to get beyond control

Still staring up at that beautiful sky
Sunset has gone and night is nearby

As the stars begin to slowly ascend
The simple serenity does transcend

And as the sun begins to rise and shine
I feel a happiness I can't quite define

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tiffani

    This is a great poem! not a common topic on here i liked it. and love the choice of words

  • 17 years ago

    by Oscar

    This is another great from you, so short, simple, to the point, and yet a hint of greatness in it. it rhymed well and flowed without flaw, the imagery was great and you did an excellent job in writing it.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Left you with a smile really beautiful!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Beautiful. This poem reminded me of watching the sunrise, talking to my best friend, I remember feeling so amazing, and having so many emotions, and you did an excellent job in describing that feeling here. I loved the wording and rhyming. Amazing job

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww it was short! I wish you made it longer :) Anyway I like your choice of words, The imagery you created in this poem is really good - I can really see the pictures in my mind. Keep up the good work!

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