I feel like this about my mum, not having her here and i think well your not here so how can you be mine. i really like this well done xxxxx

This is a really good and deep poem, its simple but beautifuly planned out. 5/5

Good job on this piece. Keep writing :)
Take care Cindy

Omgsh this is so good ! i'd love it if u checked out some of my poems.... 5/5

Nazeer