Roll Over Beethoven

In all likelihood to Mel, I myself am quite fond of listening to instrumental music, particularly the piano and the violin. In which case, this piece endears me completely. Not only was it a delightful read, but it also was strikingly gorgeous. I further liked the thought you had brought into play, 'twas appealingly inspirational. Even Beethoven himself first started as ordinary, yet promising musician. :]

"It could make anyone fall into a loving sleep,"
`I think it would flow better if you omit the 'a' and/or 'could'. :]

A pleasure to read, nevertheless. I have an enjoyable visit, as always. Keep it up!

Best wishes,
Marian

Omg, it was so nicely penned... the flow was absolutely beautiful, the structure was great and the way it all just flowed together. 5/5

The keys are pressed so lightly,
Yet something magical is produced.
It grips you in, takes full control,
Like in the act of seduce.

my fave line ^^

I liked this one, Definitly the best one I have read from you today, I'm a big music fan so it was good to see a poem such as this being written. I loved the flow it seemed flawless to me. Everything about this amazed me. Keep up the great work with producing poems such as this wonderful read. 5/5~mel